The Mount Tarawera eruption
magnificent red and orange colours glow under the black night sky . There is a huge cannon sound . Boom!!! Rocks as big as people splash into the lake the ground rumbles like a dragon roaring . Lava lights up the side of the Mountain . Rocks land around me and I swallow ash . I gasp for air . Pain shocks my face . I hear a bang and then the world turns blac.Oliver
This is an amazing start, Oliver. I wonder if this could be extended more? I'd love to read it if you extend this piece.
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