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Thursday 5 September 2013

My fav place

Bright, flashing lights hitting my brain. A big rabbit inside the store destroying a city. Red, black and white colours hypnotising me like a servant. It's like a big alien pet trying to munch me up to come inside and buy something. The red and white are the eyes and the black is the tongue which is licking me.



By Meharban

1 comment:

  1. Descriptive phrases Meharban. You just need to explain a bit more of what this place is, so that the reader understands what it is that you are describing.

    Mrs H

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