As my eyes were glued straight ahead, people's voices started to fade when I heard the blocks go clatter, BANG! My heart started thumping like a drum and my eyes squinted as I looked at the stone solid pool floor. I heard kids shouting 'lets go bears, lets go,' like a monkey talking. At the end of the race we finally hopped out. 'What a splash' I sighed.
By McKenzie
Very good adjective and descriptive words. By Heath
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